Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, December 6, 2019

limerick poem

Around the corner there's a frog
That likes to sit on lots of logs
I think there is something wrong
The string is very long
We need to find a very good dog

Every Christmas we go to mass
It's a time to give and be happy
We all eat tasty food
Spend time with family
We can be kind and help each other 

Wednesday, November 27, 2019

Acrostic Poem

Brilliant day
Interested when waking up
Really excited
The day flies by
Has lots of good moments 
Doesn't make you sad
Amazing friends

Yelling happy birthday


Poppy is really cute 
Over barking all the time
Perfect soft coat
Playing all the time
Yay she's sleeping

Friday, June 28, 2019

Water Cycle



How the Water Cycle Works.
I am learning to inform my audience through an explanation

By Aidan

What liquid has been on earth since the dinosaurs roamed and every human needs to survive? Yes, water. Did you know that three quarters of the earth is covered in water and from all that water 97 percent is salt water. That leaves only 3 percent of our water to be freshwater and only 1 percent is actually drinkable. But the water we have now, is the only water we have ever had. How is that possible, you may ask, well that’s because of the water cycle. The water cycle has three main stages. Evaporation, condensation and precipitation. These three stages make the water cycle possible and keep us alive. The first step of this of this interesting cycle is evaporation.

Evaporation is the first step of the water cycle. After it rains there are water puddles on the ground and water has fallen into lakes and streams. But after some time the puddles are gone and the ground is dry again. This is because the heat from the sun has heated the water, turning the water into steam and eventually into water vapor. Water vapor is the water from the ground, lakes and the ocean evaporating into the air. If you look at a boiling kettle you will be able to see the water turning into water vapor. At this moment, the atoms in the water get crazy and move super fast. This is because of the heat in the kettle boiling the water. When you see the water vapor disappearing it means that it is turning into gas. This is an example of evaporation. When the water rises, it leads us into condensation.

The process of condensation is when the gas forms together and makes clouds. The water vapor get cooler in the atmosphere and the vapor start turning into tiny water droplets again. The droplets reconnect and appear in the form of clouds. It's like when you take a hot shower. The vapor rising and water droplets collecting on the ceiling. When condensation happens, the gas in the clouds are cooling down. Then the water starts turning into a liquid again. The clouds then lead us into precipitation.

The third step of this interesting cycle is precipitation. When the gas cools down in the clouds the water changes back into a liquid, producing rains. Other possible forms of precipitation are snow, sleet and hail. If you get a see thru cup with boiling water and glad wrap with some ice on top you just might see rain in the cup. This is a good example of precipitation. When it rains the soil and streams collects the water which makes groundwater.

This is a complex but very easy cycle to understand. It starts when the water heats up through evaporation and forms clouds which lead to condensation and precipitation. If one of the stages are removed, there would be no water for us to drink and to use for our plants. Without water we would be in a lot of trouble. So it is important to not waste our water.


Friday, May 3, 2019

The Water Cycle


This term room six is going to be learning about the water cycle.We have all already done some research about this amazing cycle.All of us have been watching videos,researching the internet to find out more about the cycle.









Monday, April 8, 2019

Brochures



In term 1 2019 room 6 have been making sun smart brochures in writing time.We have been describing how important it is to be sun smart. We also have been able to do free choice brochures.





Friday, March 15, 2019

My Accident Story



The Accident Known as the Broken Arm 

February 2019 

Aidan 

I am learning to entertain my audience through a recount. 

The moment that this accident had occurred, I was six years old and I had a very clumsy brain. I tried to keep my clumsy brain hidden as I never wanted to show it, until one day I did show that strange brain of mine. This is how it all started. 

It was a typical Saturday evening, my friend Jack and I were bouncing on his trampoline, with no NET! Yes, that’s right the trampoline was netless. When suddenly his sister came out with a ball. Of course Jack and I wanted to have a turn of the ball. He jumped off the edge, over the bar. I watched and trust me he looked like a boss when he did it. He got the ball, I thought to myself that looked easy and because I had done it before I knew I could do it. I also wanted to look like a boss too, but that didn’t end up being the case.

I raced to the edge bar, jumped … at this point I was thinking I was fine, but I wasn’t fine. I fall down to the death of my arm, without me noticing sadly. Suddenly SMACK! My arm hit the ground and my eyes bursted in tears of sadness. I was lying on the ground as Jack’s mum came out. I got on a chair and sat down suddenly his mum came to rescue me with... an ice pack while she put on a movie to calm me down. 

In the middle of the night I couldn’t sleep, my arm was so uncomfortable! When I got home I told my mum, that my arm felt really weird. I had to waited four whole days till I went to the doctors. I got an x-ray and found out I had broken my arm. I couldn’t get a cast because i had broken my arm near my shoulder so I got a sling. Weirdly when I got to school people started asking me how i sprained arm.There was a lot of storytelling to tell to lots of people but I survived. In the end all i can say is that I didn’t look like a boss.